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A Smattering of Poetry

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by Falstaff, Jan 21, 2004.

  1. Falstaff

    Falstaff Sleep is for the Weak of Will Veteran

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    Here is a bit of poetry of mine that I have been sitting on for a while. Your potshots and comments are welcome. The second one is a personal favorite...

    untitled poem

    roar out child
    my red secret
    like a dream-song
    our dark summer evening
    my deep winter storm
    her strange love-dance

    [Edit - The other poem I had here ("chain smoking") didn't visually work like it is supposed to here. Here's a link to the rest.

    [ January 21, 2004, 23:07: Message edited by: Falstaff ]
     
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    Wow, it seems teachers can write too! :shake: ;)

    Good ones, those under that link. This one here also sounds nice, but it's a bit too short to tell more, I think. Well, so, are you bent on continuing the baroque vanitas trend? The clean and transparent build could also suggest early mannerism memento mori trend, but after a longer reading, it's quite sure it's more like the ascetic English baroque, laden with vanitas motive. Isn't it? :grin: :lol:
     
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    "guys checking out guys checking out girls checking out girls checking out guys "

    Haha, I really enjoyed that line. Good job!
     
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