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I ain't no little lover (Poetry)

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by Ofelix, Jun 14, 2004.

  1. Ofelix

    Ofelix The world changes, we do not, what irony!

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    Well for the first time ever I did a (rather) good poem using Shakspeare's tongue, and so I ask for your oppinion. Note that english isn't my main language, as my quill in Molière's tongue is by far sharper! Anyway here ya go:

    I ain’t no little lover

    You said that before me, you weren’t happy
    So many things you had to do, you almost became crazy
    I arrived just in time, sparing you from the big fall
    But c’mon you ain’t crazy, what I did was only to love you that’s all

    I deserve no thanks for that, it’s you who is magnificent as the earth
    I should be the one thanking you, you gave my heart a second birth
    When you lay yourself in the bed
    I know I’m in your head

    My love is sincere, so be prepared for some big lovin’
    Because I ain’t no little lover, didn’t you say I was charming?
    Maybe I ain’t that romantic, but I can write some
    However as you said it before, I’m still handsome

    I will never forget the colour of your eyes or hair
    With that your very beauty is spread in the air
    Now everybody who will breathe, they’ll recognise you immediately
    Now and then when I see you I can’t be more happy.

    I ain’t got a big amount of money
    I ain’t got many pretty flowers but what can I say I need you honey
    When I think of you, less is shameful
    And more is not enough plentiful

    Just what did you except? I ain’t no little lover
    My heart is full of passion for you, hence it’ll become even bigger
    I only ask for one thing, just say that you love me, that’s all
    So sweetheart, from now on can I be next to you gal?
     
    Ofelix, Jun 14, 2004
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