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Morning Light and others

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by Eze, Feb 11, 2003.

  1. Eze Gems: 24/31
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    Morning Light

    I was in the dirt
    In the dark
    No light for me
    Cause I was a prisoner
    Then the warrior came
    I saw the light
    He lifted me up
    And carried me away

    Morning light
    I see
    I am not blind anymore
    The angel carries me away
    Morning light
    Sun in the sky

    All that was missing is back again
    Again
    The rain
    The sun
    The soil
    I am free
    Again

    Morning light
    I see
    I am not blind anymore
    The angel carries me away
    Morning light
    Sun in the sky

    I come
    None wait for me
    I come home
    The lonely house
    I see again

    Morning light
    I see
    I am not blind anymore
    The angel carries me away
    Morning light
    Sun in the sky

    So I live again
    Morning light
    Beautiful morning light

    [ February 16, 2003, 10:35: Message edited by: Eze ]
     
    Eze, Feb 11, 2003
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    Is it deliberate you use none instead of no one? like none is a personification of no one. Like welcoming the quietness?

    Anyway I like it. I am brewing on a melody of it on my guitar. If it is ok with you :)
     
    Nobleman, Feb 13, 2003
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    [​IMG] Of course, you can. :D After all the pain the person has gone through s/he actually does welcome the quietness. :)

    Thanks for making my day. :)

    Eze hugs Nobleman and feels HAPPY

    EDIT:

    Here's another one.

    Last Prayer

    They whip you
    Blood soars down your back
    You bear a crown
    A crown of thorns
    You bleed
    And you say the last prayer

    Say your last prayer
    She whispers
    Demon of darkness
    Coming to claim you
    Say your last prayer
    Last prayer

    Death is here

    Say your last prayer
    She whispers
    Demon of darkness
    Coming to claim you
    Say your last prayer
    Last prayer

    They crucify you
    Hammer burning nails
    Into your hands
    And into your feet
    You pray
    But they don’t listen
    They just don’t listen

    Say your last prayer
    She whispers
    Demon of darkness
    Coming to claim you
    Say your last prayer
    Last prayer

    There you are
    Enduring the pain
    But light can be tainted
    And light shall be tainted
    They don’t hear
    As you say your last
    Your final
    Prayer

    And die.

    [ February 16, 2003, 10:35: Message edited by: Eze ]
     
    Eze, Feb 13, 2003
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    Arabwel Screaming towards Apotheosis Veteran

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    *bows down and worships the poet*

    This is incredible... wow.

    It's unsettling. But great.

    (*blioink*)
     
    Arabwel, Feb 16, 2003
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    Morgoth La lune ne garde aucune rancune Veteran

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    The last one is nice and disturbing, I love it :D
     
    Morgoth, Feb 17, 2003
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    I like it :) Very nice
     
    Aikanaro, Feb 18, 2003
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    Great! Now I have another target for my near-finished supertalent-stealing spell!

    Ancalìmon laughs and continues his spellwriting.
     
    Ancalìmon, Mar 2, 2003
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    LoL. Here's YET another one.

    A Father's Sin

    Daddy
    I loved you
    But you lied to me
    You bruised me
    You broke your promise

    A Father’s Sin
    Is important to his daughter
    Who lies
    Broken and bruised
    Her white dress
    Soiled with blood

    A Father’s Sin
    Is important to his daughter
    Who lies
    Broken and bruised
    Her white dress
    Soiled with blood

    We used to have fun (have fun)
    But then you got him
    I was tossed away easily
    Too easily
    You didn’t need me
    But I needed you
    On the time of sadness
    On the time of hate
    On the time of isolation

    A Father’s Sin
    Is important to his daughter
    Who lies
    Broken and bruised
    Her white dress
    Soiled with blood

    A Father’s Sin
    Is important to his daughter
    Who lies
    Broken and bruised
    Her white dress
    Soiled with blood

    But he brought me back
    Dying isn’t good
    You brought me back
    And you will be my new daddy
    My new daddy
    And I love you

    A Father’s Sin
    Is important to his daughter
    Who lies
    Broken and bruised
    Her white dress
    Soiled with blood

    A Father’s Sin
    Is important to his daughter
    Who lies
    Broken and bruised
    Her white dress
    Soiled with blood

    A Father’s Sin is painful
    Why you had to bear it
    Child
    A Father’s Sin can wear
    A daughter down
     
    Eze, Mar 5, 2003
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  9. Arabwel

    Arabwel Screaming towards Apotheosis Veteran

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    Eze, I have told you this once and I will tell you this twice and I will tell it to you infinitely. Your work is incredible. You are a true poet, with angst that strikes the heart. YOU ROCK!

    (the other angst gal)
     
    Arabwel, Mar 6, 2003
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    [​IMG] I like all three poems. Good poetry. :)
     
    Oaz, Mar 7, 2003
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    Thankies.

    Death Medication

    They force me to take the death medication
    The sweet voices in my head
    Those little pills in my scarred hand
    Little blue pills glowing in the dark
    Am I ready
    The voices say yes
    I say no

    Death medication so sweet
    Kills you slowly
    You lie on the floor
    Is that happiness on your face
    Before you take
    Think
    Death medication
    Is for the weak

    Death medication
    For the weak
    I took them
    The high was great
    I flew everywhere
    I rode on the rollercoaster
    But then the high stopped
    I was on the ground again
    Death medication is nothing but drugs

    Death medication so sweet
    Kills you slowly
    You lie on the floor
    Is that happiness on your face
    Before you take
    Think
    Death medication
    Is for the weak

    You tell me to stop
    Voices tell me to take it
    The death medication again
    I don’t want to
    I throw the pills away
    And fall into the void
    Void is better than Earth
     
    Eze, Mar 14, 2003
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    Soon, soon! Soon I'll steal your talent! Mwhaahahaha!
     
    Ancalìmon, Mar 14, 2003
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  13. Arabwel

    Arabwel Screaming towards Apotheosis Veteran

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    *falls on her knees and worships Eze*

    This... is... incredible. That's all I can say,

    (*watches in awe with the elves*)

    [ March 14, 2003, 19:27: Message edited by: Arabwel ]
     
    Arabwel, Mar 14, 2003
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    Thanks, ppl.

    She stands there so alone
    She spreads her hands
    Acid snow falls
    Falls and falls
    Just get out of there I yell
    But you are deaf to my cries

    Acid snow
    Destroys us
    It makes us mutate
    We turn into monsters
    Revelling in our own sh*t
    And blood
    Not even caring
    Only biting, chewing, killing, hunting
    Acid snow

    Is there any hope
    I don’t know
    I feel myself changing
    My mind turning to more mundane things
    Like an animal
    I need help
    F*cking save me
    Will you

    Acid snow
    Destroys us
    It makes us mutate
    We turn into monsters
    Revelling in our own sh*t
    And blood
    Not even caring
    Only biting, chewing, killing, hunting
    Acid snow

    We all need to break free
    This can’t last anymore

    Acid snow
    Acid snow
    Makes you weep

    Until you mutate
    You are nothing anymore
    Acid snow is fair as death
    It doesn’t choose
    Anyone can

    Acid snow
    Destroys us
    It makes us mutate
    We turn into monsters
    Revelling in our own sh*t
    And blood
    Not even caring
    Only biting, chewing, killing, hunting
    Acid snow

    I can feel
    My mind returning
    I rise and watch the carnage
    The bloodshed
    Why should I care
    It is our everyday life
     
    Eze, Mar 19, 2003
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    *blinks*

    this was.... dragging things to the ground, to the gutter.... quite interesting. Great work! You ROCK!

    (who, me, the elves, we, done something? naah... :) )
     
    Arabwel, Mar 19, 2003
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    Love Is A Sickness

    Love is a sickness
    It made me weep
    It made me desire you
    It poisoned my mind
    Love is nothing more than a sickness

    Love is a sickness
    Break free
    You don’t need it
    Love is a sickness
    A deadly sickness
    Like cancer
    Eating you inside

    Love makes you go crazy
    Even insane
    You would
    Walk through fire
    Kill
    Hate
    Screw your life
    Everybody except your deadly obsession

    Love is a sickness
    Break free
    You don’t need it
    Love is a sickness
    A deadly sickness
    Like cancer
    Eating you inside

    It is possible to get satisfaction without it
    Of course it is
    Lovers are tormented people
    Don’t join their ranks
    I don’t want to see you rotting with them
    Don’t want to see you rotting

    Love is a sickness
    Break free
    You don’t need it
    Love is a sickness
    A deadly sickness
    Like cancer
    Eating you inside

    Bad to see you go to waste
    Really bad
    Take my hand
    I’ll pull you out
    And cure you

    Love is a sickness
    Break free
    You don’t need it
    Love is a sickness
    A deadly sickness
    Like cancer
    Eating you inside

    And cure you
    Cause you need it
    Desperately
     
    Eze, Apr 16, 2003
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    Hmmm. Ever heard 'Love Bites' by Def Lepard?
     
    Shura, Apr 17, 2003
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    *thud*

    Wow. Simply wow, wow, WOW. You creep me out, Ezenem.... You creep me out. This is uber-cool. Great work!

    (Elrond, get your pointy-eared self here!)
     
    Arabwel, Apr 17, 2003
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    Shura: Nope.

    Arabwel: Thanks, thanks. *bows and hands Ara several pictures of Hugo in latex*

    P.S. This poem is not about me, it's about my bestfriends character in the movie scenario we are writing.

    The Little Girl

    Mother didn’t care
    How would she in this torture fare
    Father was proven guilty
    The little girl’s life was faulty
    Nobody heard her plea
    So she found her comfort
    Her solace
    In drugs
    In booze
    Don’t blame her
    Don’t hate her
    What could she do
    With her mother not caring
    With her stepfather abusing her
    With noone giving a damn
    The little girl huddled in the corner
    Cowering
    Crying
    Watching at her scarred hands
    The little girl named
    Liz.
     
    Eze, Apr 23, 2003
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  20. Arabwel

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    Thanks for the pics, Eze *glomps*

    What can I say? This is great,... disturbing, but great. But do is everything you write. I have said it earlier, and I say it again. This is GOOD:

    (*gets the latex* Elrond, come here, will you?)
     
    Arabwel, Apr 23, 2003
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