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My love poem! (Poetry)

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by SleepleSS, Mar 10, 2005.

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    [​IMG] Finally it is finished, I wrote a poem about love instead of death! It's still in my wicked way and I think not much girls will be flattert by it, but I think it's pretty good! It's slightly based on the female vocal parts of the Jezebel Deva fix of Cradle Of filths Nymphetamine, very very slightly...

    ~Here it is:~

    Go to the river
    (fall) on my knees to prey
    Singing to my demon,
    for my angel to stay
    And if the end of the world,
    today is true
    I wouldn't care
    since I spent it with you...

    Midsummer night trampling
    Of my wildest dreams
    A swan song for a raven
    Cursed on the silver screen
    Travelling through mirrors
    Moonlit sky is above
    My eyes blinded forever
    By this vision of love

    Guided by your love
    I will trample their holiness
    Spilling blessed wine
    But never in vein
    Freed from my faith
    I escape from my loneliness
    Blessed forever
    By a love so insane


    ~Or is it better this way?:~

    Midsummer night trampling
    Of my wildest dreams
    A swan song for a raven
    Cursed on the silver screen
    Travelling through mirrors
    Moonlit sky is above
    My eyes blinded forever
    By this vision of love

    Guided by your love
    I will trample their holiness
    Spilling blessed wine
    But never in vein
    Freed from my faith
    I escape from my loneliness
    Blessed forever
    By a love so insane

    Going to the river
    (fall) on my knees to prey
    Singing to my demon,
    for my angel to stay
    And if the end of the world,
    today is true
    I wouldn't care
    since I spent it with you...

    Guided by your love
    I will trample their holiness
    Spilling blessed wine
    But never in vein
    Freed from my faith
    I escape from my loneliness
    Blessed forever
    By a love so insane
     
    SleepleSS, Mar 10, 2005
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    what does this part mean exactly? :)

     
    Enagonios, Mar 10, 2005
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    'the silver screen' would be the water surface, I believe. Nice poem sleepless, and clearly Cradle of Filth inspired.

    [ March 11, 2005, 19:25: Message edited by: Ancalìmon ]
     
    Ancalìmon, Mar 10, 2005
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    [​IMG] The silverscreen is actually the screen where movies are projected on in cinema's but indeed it's also the ocean (or:water surface) or the face of a mirror.

    thanx anc!

    Here is the mising piece:I don't jnow yet where to put it in the poem...

    Escape from my prison
    One foot in the grave
    A thorn from a rose stings
    To show that I’m save
    Like a wolf in the snow //Tears of happyness
    (as)Stars guide the way
    When I’m lost like a needle
    In a pile of golden hay

    [ March 11, 2005, 23:11: Message edited by: SleepleSS ]
     
    SleepleSS, Mar 10, 2005
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