Some of my lyrics

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Piece By Piece
The background noise that centres in around your voice
The background fuzz that hones in upon your choice
Some kind of miracle is all it take to move your face
Some kind of catastrophe is what i need to find a place

Piece by Piece by Piece the pieces fall away
Part by Part by Part the parts come to play

Open your own cages, set yourselves free

A twilight trombone quartet plucks the straws from the tower
A rogue nation of LandFill sights pulls on his majesty's power
Lunatics have the run of the streets and there halls
Jamboree kaleidescope of spaceship throw down falls

Piece by Piece by Piece the pieces fall away
Part by Part by Part the parts come to play

Open your own cages, set yourselves free

what do you think?

 

I think you need to work on your lyrics

 

I kinda like the second verse...

 

yeah they are ****, i kinda felt a little flurish of creativity and posted them before they were done.

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I dunno, doesn't sound too bad to me. I know its really difficult to write lyrics (which is why I let other folk do it while I write riffs), so, at least to kme, its impressive.

 

how about these, it's about maggie thatcher

Pain polluted days dripping from our mouths
rivers of solitude mountains of money
images of perfection porcelain laid lips
speaking gospels of consumerism

millions of smiles beckoning understanding feigning meaning
of another to each other

Pain polluted days sucking crucifix money
pledging happiness upon the altar of indifference
souls stabbed senseless by the cult of the nameless
that culls everything

millions of smiles beckoning understanding feigning meaning
of another to each other

Chorus
de-thatcherisation
major sits their toryfiying
that loves banks
that builds tanks
de-thatcherisation
major sits their toryfiying
that ignores truth in persuit of lies
that paints perfection into living rooms

Pain plays his little games of poll tax
pledging freedom for every white alpha male
images of perfection porcelain laid lips
speaking gospels of consumerism

millions of smiles beckoning understanding feigning meaning
of another to each other

Pain sends his ships to little argentina
Fountins of gunpowder and amonia
souls stabbed senseless by the cult of the nameless
that culls everything

millions of smiles beckoning understanding feigning meaning
of another to each other

Chorus
de-thatcherisation
major sits their toryfiying
what unbreakable silence
what wet strangled sun;
de-thatcherisation
major sits their toryfiying
what screams this silence
what atrophy throws bricks nowhere

what anxiety stabs arteries from darkness
what suits stretch skin to rebellion
yet rebellion is only a page and existence continues enraged
clothes scag on barbed wire laws
what anxiety stabs arteries from darkness
what suits stretch skin to rebellion
yet rebellion is only a page and existence continues enraged
clothes scag on barbed wire laws

 

Ha, well maybe slightly better then your first lot. Are those Morrissey inspired or something?

 

noooo, inspired by the ****ing awful tories!

 

They remind of a Morrissey song, can’t be a bad thing. Anyway, hope you don’t hate the Tories that much, they will win the election.

 

tORIES? Maybe I did miss something but how are the Tories?

 

Christ. Man, can you just do like a proof read before you post in future please? I can never understand your posts and it makes you look stupid.

Tories