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The Soul of the Axe

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by Kitrax, Jul 10, 2002.

  1. Kitrax

    Kitrax Pantaloons are supposed to go where!?!?

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    Ok, this my first time doing this, so if it sucks, don't be too harsh on me.

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    As Kitrax stepped out of his red-bricked castle near the Forrest of Mir, he was greeted with a kiss and a hug from his extremely beautiful wife, Safana.

    "How was your rest my lord?" she said playfully.

    He swung around quickly; the morning sun catching in his brown eyes said, "You know I hate it when you call me that. Unless of course, you would prefer me to call you one of the many nicknames your father called you. Hmmm, I know! From now on Safana West shall be called Shnuk--"

    "NO, not that one! Anything but that one. I- I promise I'll never call you 'my lord' again." She said as her face turned red.

    "Thank you. I just want to enjoy the sunrise with you in my--" His words being cut short by a knight on horse back racing toward them.

    Within moments Kitrax could see that is was Robert, Captain of the Guard. Kitrax had gotten most of the scars on his body while fighting along side Robert while in battle.

    As he rode up to the couple, he took off his helmet, and winked at his sister, then turned to Kitrax. Wiping sweat from his scared brow, and with a urgent tone he said, "Sir! There is an army of Drow advancing from the north!"

    "How many, and where are they now" Kitrax said; his stomach dropping to his feet.

    "Five hundred, maybe more. They will be at the far edge of the forest in an hour or so. What should we do?" Robert said franticly.

    "We shall go to the Throne Room, there, we shall plan our attack." Kitrax said turning to kiss his wife good-bye.

    "Hey! What ever happened to watching the sunrise?" She said, knowing that Kitrax would be too preoccupied to respond.

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    Ok...first, before you ask, this was only the first part of the first chapter. I want to know what you think about it first, before I continue. Also, if I do continue, I will be adding a list of characters. :rolling:
     
    Kitrax, Jul 10, 2002
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  2. zaknafein Guest

    As you add these new characters I advise that you describe them slightly better than what you did just then. After all, description is everything(sometimes)
     
    zaknafein, Jul 10, 2002
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