The United

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In this world times are hard and there are more divisions than unitings

One had the sight to view the world in this way and to make a difference.

Flewinster. Flewinster was a Dracon Shaman, she hung around the nobility, gaining reputation to become respected in a treacherous society. She felt guilty though - she had abandoned her younger brother - Frone. But that didn't matter, they were going to reunite, it had to start somewhere...

Flewinster sat nervously in her seat, she had brought a tavern for her own use, it had been ideal as it had many secret passages known only by herself and the previous owner who was in debt to Flewinster and trustworthy. Flewinster glanced across to a corner where Frone and his freind Scartooth were playing cards, both were Dracons, both were getting drunk. Flewinster jumped as there was a knock on the door, she jumped up and opened the door and a tall Sidhe with white wings and long blonde hair entered
"Lucie! You came!"
"Anything for a friend!" Lucie smiled and sat in a corner, soon there was another knock Flewinster opened the little window in the door
"Who is there? Why are you wobbling around?"
"Er... This is Didsy, I am a halfling"
"Why are you so tall?"
"I am standing on Jonsaw, he is a Gnome"
"hello!"
"Ah! I see, and who just grunted?"
"Oh that was Klaxen, Jonsaw is standing on him, Klaxen is a dwarf"
"I think you had all better come in..." Flewinster opened the door and they all tumbled in Klaxen settled down with a pint while Didsy was talking eagerly to everyone, Jonsaw was bouncing around the room, chuckling and muttering strangly and making cat noises as he Luaghed insanly at the wall. He barked as there was a knocking at the door, It was Herum the Minotaur, both Scartooth and Frone leapt up and snarled, Dracons and Minotaurs hated Each other. Herum had tolerated Flewinster and had eventually become friends but the enimity between him and her brother was impossible to overcome, Flewinster feared one would kill the other, She knew that Scartooth would join against Herum being biased, and Dracon. Herum sat away from the glaring pair and they slowly sat down to continue their game and give wary glances towards the Dracon.

Post comments please!, I won't post any more, atm, but there is more to come!

 

yeah i like it

 

Interesting. Although the reading is kind of hard on the eyes when there aren't spaces between paragraphs. And I always have to nitpick - a few grammar and spelling errors here and there, maybe a tad clumsy with writing.