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Padeen's Adventures

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by Padine the Paladin, Jul 1, 2002.

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  1. Padeen Dragonblade Gems: 13/31
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    Remove all ads!
    Thanks Eze.
    I've been taking flames critizism all my life so yes I can take it all.
     
    Padeen Dragonblade, Sep 7, 2002
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  2. Eze Gems: 24/31
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    That is very good, Padeen.
     
    Eze, Sep 7, 2002
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  3. TheBlackRose Gems: 13/31
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    I could edit your story if you want, Padeen/The Fallen. It would be my pleasure.

    Private message me if you are interested.
     
    TheBlackRose, Sep 15, 2002
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  4. Aikanaro Gems: 31/31
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    [​IMG] I'm starting to like this story! Now what you need is some paragraphing and a bit of subtility when introducing major gods as the characters father and you'll have thios thing nailed.
     
    Aikanaro, Sep 16, 2002
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  5. nior Gems: 24/31
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    a little advice.

    i'm sure you have an MS-Word or some other editor. write your stories using those with spelling and grammar check turned on. this way you'll have less problem with mispelling or wrong grammar. if you think you keep repeating some words, use the thesaurus to look for variety or substitute. also it serves as your master copy, printing and editing it would be easier. and you need only to cut and paste it into sp, this saves you a lot of login-time, you can use those saved time posting in other topics.

    read you story over and over. you might see a better approach in telling it or insert or omit some ideas to improve it.

    you're getting better. :)
     
    nior, Sep 16, 2002
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  6. Teensabre Gems: 9/31
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    That's pretty good for Grammar and spelling when put up against your first attempt, and the story's pretty good - Pretty Darn Good! ;)
     
    Teensabre, Sep 16, 2002
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